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Sara Dietz's avatar

Ann, this was such an unexpected plot twist!

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Ann Gauger's avatar

Yes. I have criticized in the past for not creating a sufficient character arc, and so rather go on through a Harry Potter style schooling, I decided to up the ante and bring in Voldemort in chapter3. No sweet little elves here. It's more like Frodo being chased out of the Shire by Black Riders.

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Sara Dietz's avatar

Great choice 👌

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